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读后续写;;;;Iwasinmiddleschool,my...teacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.
Isaidno.Ididnotlovewriting.
MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglish...secondlanguage.
Writingwassodifficultandpainfulforme...
whyheforcedme..
Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories...Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”
Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.;IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)...rodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775..towarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.
Mystorywouldcomefromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny,andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.
Whatdidthehorsethink?...Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?...Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard...
WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughed...andsaid“writeitagain.”Iwroteagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.;情节;情节;whenIwasaboutoneyearold;;读后续写TEAM写作框架:;读后续写TEAM写作框架:;读后续写——写(2023全国I卷);读后续写——写(2023全国I卷);AfewweekslaterwhenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.
T:Iwonfirstplace.
E:ThatmayhavebeenthefirsttimeinmylifeIhavebeenstruckdumb,inanylanguage.(震惊得说不出话来)
A+E:WhenIsharedthenewswithmyteacher,hiseyeswerebrightwithdelightimmediately.(眼里充满了喜悦)
T:Twodayslater,anawardpresentationwasheld.
A+E:WhenIwalkedonstage,Iexpressedmygratitudetomyteacher.
M:Iknewwithouthisrecognitionandguidance,Icouldnthavewrittenthisarticle,letalone(更别提)winningthecontest.;Iwenttomyteachersofficeaftertheawardpresentation.
T:Myteacherwaswaitingforme.
A+M:Holdingmyhands,hesaid,“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“Thankyou.Igetatasteforwritingthisspringbecauseofyou.Ilear
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