高考英语十年（2016-2025）真题《书面表达通知、演讲稿类》专项汇编（答案解析版）.docxVIP

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高考英语十年（2016-2025）真题《书面表达通知、演讲稿类》专项汇编（答案解析版）

考点01演讲稿

Writing1

【2025浙江1月卷】66．你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：

(1)陈述看法；

(2)提出建议。

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

MyViewsonFilmingShortVideosonCampus

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【答案】MyViewsonFilmingShortVideosonCampus

Dearclassmates,

Recently,someofushavebeenfilmingshortvideosoncampus.Inmyopinion,itcanbeafunwaytorecordcampuslife,butitalsohasitsdrawbacks.Notonlymayitdistractusfromourstudiesandevendisrupttheschoolorder,butitmightalsocauseunnecessarycomparisonsandaffectourself-esteemwhenthevideosdon’tgettheexpectedresponse.

Isuggestweshouldlimitthetimeforfilmingandchooseproperplaces.Let’sfocusmoreonouracademictasksandmakegooduseofourtimeoncampus.

Thankyou!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求考生针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象陈述看法并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

记录：record→document

缺点：drawback→disadvantage

分散注意力：distract→divert

建议：suggest→propose

2.句式拓展

并列句变复合句

原句：Inmyopinion,itcanbeafunwaytorecordcampuslife,butitalsohasitsdrawbacks.

拓展句：Inmyopinion,itcanbeafunwaythatwecanusetorecordcampuslife,butitalsohasitsdrawbacks.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Notonlymayitdistractusfromourstudiesandevendisrupttheschoolorder,butitmightalsocauseunnecessarycomparisonsandaffectourselfesteemwhenthevideosdon’tgettheexpectedresponse.(运用了notonly...butalso...并列结构和从属连词when引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2]Isuggestweshouldlimitthetimeforfilmingandchoose