人教版九年级上册英语精品教学课件 UNIT 7 写作能力提升练 (8).pptVIP

**写作任务话题写作常见错误呈现实战演练UNIT7写作能力提升练假如你叫李华，最近你和你的父母就“周末学生该不该与同学外出活动”进行了讨论。现在请你以“Shouldteenagersgooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends?”为话题，参照表内所提供的信息，写一篇80~100词的英语短文。［审题指导］1.体裁:议论文2.人称:第一人称，第三人称3.时态:以一般现在时为主［思路点拨］RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends.Myparentsthinkthatteenagersshouldstayathometogoovertheirlessons.Andtheyshouldhaveenoughtimetohaveagoodsleep.Meanwhile,theyshouldhelptheirparentsdosomehouseworkiftheyarefree.［精彩范文］Inmyopinion,weteenagersshouldbeallowedtogooutwithourfriendsforfunsothatwecanrelaxourselves.Andwecanalsotakesomeexercisetogethertokeepfit.What’smore,wecanalsoshareideaswitheachotherandopenupourmind.Allinall,Ithinkweshouldbeallowedtogooutwithourfriendsonweekends.1.本文思路清晰，采用了“总—分—总”结构，即开篇引出话题、介绍父母与自己各自的观点、总结表达自己的观点。2.连接词运用恰当，尤其是and,meanwhile,inmyopinion,what’smore,allinall等的运用为作文增彩。3.正确运用一些短语，比如：haveadiscussionwith,keepfit,share...witheachother,openupourmind等使文章更为丰富精彩。4.文中if条件状语从句、sothat目的状语从句，宾语从句以及被动结构的使用等成为文章的加分点。高分点评：下面句子均有1、2处错误，请找出并改正。1.Idon’tthink17-year-oldsshouldallowtodrive.__________________________________________________2.I’mworryaboutyoursafety._________________________________________________Idontthink17-year-oldsshouldbeallowedtodrive.Imworriedaboutyoursafety.3.They’reoldenoughmaketheirowndecisions._________________________________________________4.Iunderstandthis,butIseriousaboutrunning._________________________________________________5.Heshouldstopwearthosesillyearring._________________________________________________Theyreoldenoughtomaketheirowndecisions.Iunderstandthis,butImseriousaboutrunning.Heshouldstopwearingthosesillyearrings.目前，随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的家庭有了汽车，于是很多中学生想开车。尽管法律、父母不允许，可他们依然我行我素。请你以“Should