沪教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 6 课时5 Writing (3).pptVIP

Unit6Caringforyourhealth课时5Writing

单词develop,habit,fresh,less,necessary,knowledge,housework,spare,remember短语inmyopinion,stayuplate,junkfood,carefor,inoursparetime,getgoodgrades

句型1.It’sveryimportantforustodevelopgoodhabits.2.Alwaysremembertowashhandsbeforemeals.

良好的习惯让人受益终身。如何培养良好的习惯？请根据以下要点，以“HowtoDevelopGoodHabits”为题，用英语写一篇短文。不少于70词。要点：1.坚持锻炼，不要熬夜，睡眠充足；2.多吃水果蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品；3.努力学习，广泛阅读；4.体贴父母，多做家务……

[审题指导]1.体裁：议论文2.人称：描述个人观点以第一人称为主3.时态：对一般事实进行描述，以一般现在时为主

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［精彩范文］HowtoDevelopGoodHabitsIt’sveryimportantforustodevelopgoodhabits.Asteenagers,whatshouldwedo?Inmyopinion,itisagoodhabittokeepexercising.Don’tstayuplateandgetenoughsleep.What’smore,weshouldeatmorefreshfruitandvegetablesandlessjunkfood.It’snecessaryforustostudyhardandreadmorebookstogetmoreknowledge.

Weshouldalsocareaboutourparentsandhelpthemdomorehouseworkinoursparetime.Alwaysremembertowashhandsbeforemeals.Goodhabitshelpusgetgoodgradesandlivehappily.

高分点评：1.思路清晰，采用“总—分—总”的三段式结构。2.Inmyopinion,What’smore等词和短语的运用使得写作要点一目了然。3.It’s+adj.+forsb.todosth.句型和祈使句Do/Don’tdosth.运用熟练，成为文章的加分点。

［2024·咸阳三模］假如你是李华，你校英语报发起了关于青少年的心理健康（mentalhealth）的征文活动。请以“HowtoKeepHealthyinOurMind”为题，结合下列参考词汇，联系实际，写一篇英语短文，谈谈我们作为中学生该如何保持心理健康。不少于70（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇:communicatewith,brave,domoresports...

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ithinkthefollowingsuggestionsmightbehelpful.Firstly,weshouldcommunicatewithnotonlyourparentsandfriendsbutalsoourteachersandcl