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2022年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试（二）

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1.优秀范文

范文1

Forhours,wedrovethroughthecity.Nowandthen,theoldwomanwouldaskmetoslow

downorpullup.Aftertheshortstopatherprimaryschool,sheshowedmethebuildingwhereshe

hadonceworkedasanengineer.Thenwedrovethroughtheneighborhoodwheresheandher

husbandhadlivedwhentheyhadfirstbeenmarried.Shehadmepullupinfrontofafurniture

warehousethathadoncebeenapark,whereshehadspentthebesttimewithherdaughter.

Sometimesshewouldhavemeslowdowninfrontofaparticularbuildingorcornerandwouldsit

staringintothedarkness,sayingnothing.Asthefirsthintofsunwascreasingthehorizon,she

suddenlysaid,“I’mready.Let’sgonow.”Wedroveinsilencetothenursinghome.Aswepulled

up,twonurseswerewaitingforus.Theyhelpedherintoawheelchair.

“HowmuchdoIoweyou?”sheasked,reachingforherpurse.“Nothing,”Isaid.Without

thinking,Ileaneddownandgaveherahug.Shehuggedmetightly.“Yougaveanoldwomana

littlemomentofjoy,”shesaid.“Thankyou.”Isqueezedherhandandthenwalkedbacktomytaxi.

Fortherestofthatday,Icouldhardlytalk.IbelieveIhaveneverdoneanythingmoreimportantin

mylife.Weusuallythinkthatourlivesaredefinedbygreatmoments.ButInowrealisethatgreat

momentscatchusbysurprise,becausetheyoftenseemquitesmall.(根据原文改编，260words)

范文2

Forhours,wedrovethroughthecity.Sheshowedmeherprimaryschoolandsharedwithme

somefunnystoriesofherschooldaysandfriends.Thensheaskedmetopullupnearapeaceful

square,where,asshetoldmeinagentlevoice,shefirstmetherhusband.Shesatonthebackseat

still,gazingatthesquarethroughamistoftearsforamoment,andthensignaledmetomoveon.

Alltheway,IjustlistenedattentivelyasifIwasaloyalaudiencetomymotherwhousedtocallup

hergoodolddays.Afterwhatseemedlikeamagica