在职硕士英语冲刺班写作讲义(王兆飞).doc

2011在职硕士英语冲刺写作讲义 一、写作简介 根据《同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语水平全国统一考试大纲》的规定，考生应具有用英语书面表达思想的基本能力。写作部分设一题，15分。考试时间为30分钟。要求考生在规定的时间内按照题目要求用英语写出一篇不少于150个词的短文，考试形式为根据提纲作文、看图作文、描述图表或根据一篇所给文章写出内容提要或读后感等。二、写作评分标准 评判批改作文时，主要从内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，和语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍有密切的关系。因此写作评分标准主要围绕四个方面：（1）内容切题；（2）能正确地表达思想；（3）意义连贯；（4）无重大语法错误。具体分为以下五个等次:2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 注: 白卷作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想则给0分。字数不足应酌情扣分。 累计字数 140～149 130～139 120～129 110～119 100～109 90～99 80～89 79 扣 分 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9 注:1. 如题目中给出主题句起始句结束句均不得计入所写字数。 2. 规定内容未写全者按比例扣分。 三、写作评分实例 Directions: Write an essay of 150 words based on the drawing given below. In your essay, you should describe the drawing briefly; explain its intended meaning, and then give your comments （1） As the picture vividly depict that internet like a net connect different people in the world. You can communicate with your friends. No matter where they live in, the distance no longer an obstacle in our communication. The picture reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that people in a mounting numbers use internet shopping, work, study and chatting with friends in order to meet each other face and face. There are somewhat reasonable, but you weighing in mind, you can find that distance between our spirit longer than before. On the Internet we can not know each other very well, because some people don’t use their real name, even tell lies on internet. On the conterary, if we meet each other face and face, it’s better for communication. Internet make the obstacle of distance vanished, benefit us a lot, we can chating with our friends who live in a city that far from us. However, we should take that serious internet make the distance of our spirit longer than before, internet is a double-edge sword. （2） As illustrated in the cartoon, each pe