河南省郑州市2014高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练三.docVIP

郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（3）附参考范文 (201*·石家庄质检) I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________ such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________ songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3.________ interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________ to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________ and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________ able to improving the friendship between China and7.________ the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________ And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________ harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10.________ 答案与解析： 1．hobby→hobbies　many后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。 2．piano前加the　play the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。 3．去掉most　favorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。 4．√ 5．But→So　前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。 6．west→western　依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。 7．improving→improve　be able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。 8．hoped→hope　这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。 9．去掉in　I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。 10．how→what　no matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。 *************************************************************结束 请根据下表内容写一篇介绍刘国正的英语短文。 注意：1．词数：120左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 姓名 出生地 出生时间 身高 体重 职业 刘国正 湖北武汉 1980年 1．66m 63kg 乒乓球运动员 经历、成 就、特点 1．六岁开始打球； 2．1995年进入国家队； 3．训练刻苦； 4．曾多次荣获国家及国际大赛冠军； 5．特点：敢打敢拼；心理素质好，大赛发挥出色。 现况 2012年1月3日正式成为国乒男二队主教练 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Liu Guozheng，a super table tennis star，was born in Wuhan，Hubei Province in 1980.He is 1．66 meters tall and weighs 63 kilograms. When he was six，he began to play table tennis.In 1995，he was chosen to the National Team.He trained hard and was strict with himself.Since then，he has won several championships in the national and international matches.Daring to struggle in th