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揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（9）附参考范文 (201*石家庄质检) I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________ such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________ songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3.________ interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________ to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________ and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________ able to improving the friendship between China and7.________ the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________ And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________ harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10.________ 答案与解析： 1．hobby→hobbies　many后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。 2．piano前加the　play the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。 3．去掉most　favorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。 4．√ 5．But→So　前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。 6．west→western　依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。 7．improving→improve　be able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。 8．hoped→hope　这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。 9．去掉in　I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。 10．how→what　no matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。 *******************************************************结束 作文（***） 今年5月31日是第21个世界无烟日，英文21世纪报计划举办一次征艾比赛，主 1．绝大部分青少年吸烟者认为暖姻蓝禧粳酷，氆禾套马上对身体产生危害，只要 2．请你驳斥这种观点，应包含以下信息：吸烟浪费金钱，浑身气味，牙齿肮脏，上瘾 3．提出一些帮助人们戒烟的建议(至少60词)。 注意：词数120～150，文章标题已绘出，不计入总词数。 Smoking is Not Cool and Quit NowOne possible version： Smoking is Not Cool and Quit Now Most young smokers say smoking is cool and doesn’t hurt us fight now．People can just stop before it gets dangerous． But in my opinion，smoking is not cool at all．In addition to the waste of money，smoking makes you smell bad and makes your teeth dirty．Being addicted to cigarettes will poison your bedy with cancer causing by—products．Dying of lung and heart disease or cancer won’t promote your popularityDon’t quit until its too late-smoking begins to damage your body the moment you start． To quit you should first set a date a