抽丝剥茧洞察高考英语写作.pptVIP

抽丝剥茧洞察高考英语写作 一、高考写作知多少？ 1）高考英语写作的字数要多少？总分是多少？ 2）高考英语写作考什么类型的文章呢？ 3）高考英语写作出题的特点是什么？有规律吗？ 120-150；25分 议论文+特殊文体 校园生活+自我观点 二、高分作文标准 高考评分 VS 中考评分： 加分制原则 VS 减分制原则 1.评分原则 结构分 语言分 内容分 2. Content 3. Language （1）语法结构标准 grammar The price of milk is expensive than grain. 语言分减分 The price of milk is higher than the price of grain. 得到语言分 The price of milk is higher than that of grain. 语言分加分 （2）用词表达规范 diction It makes me study more knowledge. It makes me get more knowledge. It makes me acquire/gain/ obtain more knowledge. 语言分减分 得到语言分 语言分加分 斩首行动——第一反映词 4. structure 句式的多样化，文章结构的紧凑 注意： 适当运用好的词汇句式 少用过难甚至严重超纲的词汇 根据内容分和语言分进行综合评分 三、高考写作解题步骤 审题： Topic+时态人称地点 4. 检查 3. 成文 2. 框架 构思框架： P1 S(1) topic S(2) thesis P2 S(3) transitional sentence S(4) argument 1 S(5) detail 1 S(6) argument 2 S(7) detail 2 S(8) argument 3 S(9) detail 3 P3 S(10) conclusion P1 S(1) topic S(2) thesis P2 S(3) transitional sentence S(4) argument 1 S(5) detail 1 S(6) detail 2 S(7) argument 2 S(8) detail 1 S(9) detail 2 P3 S(10) conclusion 比如：写自己最喜欢的一部电影的原因。(Forrest Gump)《阿甘正传》 topic： Forrest Gump thesis: be beneficial to me in terms of knowledge and personality argument1: add to the knowledge of American culture detail: the movie refers all significant issues in American history （小石城事件；越南战争；水门事件；乒乓外交） argument2: be inspired by the personality of Forrest（honesty；bravery；purity；diligence；optimism） detail: pursue his dream, cherish hopes to the life, never hesitate to challenge himself 写作常犯错误分析： 1. 前后顺接 2. 分句和短语 3. 非谓语动词与主语 4. 代词指代 5. 重复表达 1.前后顺接 As we were driving out in the country, we met a man riding a bike, and we passed a truck loaded with fruit and vegetables, and we stopped by a shop to buy some food on our way back. 正确： As we were driving out in the country, we met a man riding a bike. Later we passed a truck loaded with fruit and vegetables. Finally，we stopped by a shop