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Note：1.括号中的单词或短语是术语的英文。 2.句子后标的数字代表引用的出处。 3.因为写初稿时沿用了英文的提纲，所以有下划线的蓝色句子部分是前面句子的原文，可以不用翻译。第二段没有标下划线的是摘录的句子，请帮我编排一下语法。 PS.这个是我的GRADE PAPER，里面还要求短评。所以请各位翻译后写一个英文的评价，说下这样写好不好，有什么不足或者没有阐述清楚的，还可以怎么进步，大概就评论下缺点优点写作风格的样子。 COMMUNITY ON THE SEA 在我眼中，建筑不仅是连接艺术、自然，人类居住需求的连接，而且是记录人们生活方式的变迁和发展的载体。在陆地资源大有开发殆尽的趋势下，作为可居住依托的海上资源却仍是一块处女地。 海上人造社区和城市(community on the sea)一直被誉为人类建筑史上的终极梦想，幸运的是，我们已经在路上了。 In my eye, Architecture is not only the best combination of art, nature and living necessity, but also the record of people’s changing living style. With the tendency of land resources exhaustion, ocean resources are still virgin lands waiting to be explored for living. The community on the sea has been hailed as the ultimate dream of mankinds architectural history, fortunately, we are on the road. 全球变暖的加速使的海平面上升，导致我们在考虑那些未来派的作品时不得不现实一点。The global warming accelerates the rise of the sea-level, driving us to consider some futuristic projects in a different prospective. Frits Schoute, a former professor at Delft University said Its an easy place to get energy, to produce drinking water and find new food sources -- all those factors combined will make it very attractive for the world population and ultimately a necessity to live on the sea,. He expects colonization by these floating cities to take place in the next 20 years. (4) community on the sea 的主流建筑 mainstream projects 荷兰已经开始兴建他们水上漂流屋，一种完全漂浮在水面上，像船一样没有固定几座，小巧且可以用拖船（tugboat）移动.；另一种则有柔软的地基（building ground），随着水位升降，较为固定。两种型号都在下面加了水泥空心砖以增加稳定性。(1) 迪拜的人造奇迹在不影响海洋生态系统的情况下，不惜工本投注了三亿两千万立方米的沙土和三千两百万吨岩石，填出了一个世界岛(6)。 Netherlands has started building their floating houses. The houses mainly have 2 types. One can float on the water without ground base like boat, it is small and can be moved by tugboat; with building ground, the other kind is relatively fixed but can rise and down up to the sea level. Both of them have a hollow concrete cube at the base to give them buoyancy. Without effect on ocean ecosystem, Dubai spares neither labor nor money to con