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专四作文应试技巧 评分标准 1. 15分:文章内容切题,思想表达清楚，行文通顺流畅，论证严密，论据充分，基本无语言错误。 2. 14-12分：文章内容切题,思想表达清楚，语言比较通顺连贯，只有极少数语法错误 3.11-19分：基本切题，尚能表达主题，但说理不够清楚，文字连贯不够好，有少量语法错误 4. 8-6分：基本切题，思想表达不够清楚，连贯性差，语言错误较多。 5. 5-3分：文章条理不清，语言缺乏连贯性，句子错误很多或语言虽然通畅但完全偏题 思想与表达 1. 思想内容 范例1 why do we lie As little children, most of us were taught the virtue of honesty from fairy tails and other stories. The story of Pinocchio, who begins life as a puppet, teaches us the importance of telling the truth. The boy who lied by “crying wolf” too many times lost all his sheep as well as the trust of his fellow villagers. In the story of young George Washington, who lied about cutting down the cherry tree, we learn that he earns his father’s praise only when he admits what he has done. Even though we know that “honesty is the best policy,” why do we often lie in our everyday lives? The fact is that we lie for many reasons. We sometimes lie to minimize our mistakes. While it’s true that we all make mistakes sometimes, some of us don’t have the courage to admit them because we might be blamed for the error. For example, students might lie to their teachers about an unfinished assignment. They might say that they left the work at home when, in fact, they didn’t even do the work. These students don’t want to seem irresponsible, so they make up an excuse -- a lie -- to save face. Another reason we lie is to get out of situations that we don’t want to be in. If we just don’t want to attend the dorm meeting early on Saturday morning, we might give this excuse: “I’ve been fighting off a cold all week, and I need to sleep on Saturday morning, but I’ll be sure to attend the next meeting.” We lie because we believe that telling the truth will cause problems. We may feel an obligation to maintain good relations with our doormats. When we don’t know how to say no and face whatever problems that may cause, we often use lies to avoid difficulties. However, lies are not always negati