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写作任务写作步骤和思路 1. 审题：师生关系 共多少点，重点写那一点，每一点的关键词是什么 A. 如何和老师相处 要不要写老师如何做？ B.与老师相处的好处 要不要写老师和学生关系好，老师的好处？ C.用事例说明和谐的成长关系对你的成长有何影响 When I was faced with difficulties, I would turn to teachers for help. After talking to them, I felt much better. So a good relationship between …is beneficial. 要想具体实际例子！！！ 1）例子突出什么重点？ 2）第一个念头想到的例子往往是街货，想想有没有更好的例子 不要调换几点要求之间的顺序，想办法找之间逻辑，不要改变顺序 2. 看所给文章， 1）确定文章类型 2）划关键词，以及注意能运用在自己文章的好词好句！ Teachers, students, relationship, closer , nevertheless, power 3. 开始写作 1.） 除书信外，一律写title！！ 标题: 自定（突出主题） 2. ）summary a.绝对不能用第一，第二人称 b.多注意每段第一句和最后一句 c. 凡是出现转折的意思，一定要注意，大多要列入SUMMARY里 d. 要在开头表明是他人文章说… Eg. The passage tells us…. e. 尽量采用先总后分的结构 The passage tells us a kind of relationship between teachers and students. That is the interactivity between them. 2分 有先总后分的架构，但是没有说明nevertheless后的内容 The article tells the readers that teachers are not despotic people. But it doesn’t mean that teachers have lost their power. 2分 没有先总说， 没有讲明现状。 The passage is mainly concerned with the present friendly relationship between teachers and students. The tie has become relaxing and pleasant, but it doesn’t mean that the teachers have lost the power over their students. 3) 写完SUMMARY后，想过渡！！ 给出文章是记叙文：Having seen the above story, I couldn’t help pondering, for I myself have a parallel incidence. 给出文章是议论文：The point of view stated above is really worth paying attention to. I myself am in favor of /not in favor of the opinion. 考前认真背，看实际情况运用 4）写完过渡，根据要求的顺序，分点分段写！！！ The Ideal Relationship between Teachers and Students （名，动，形容词大写，即实意词大写） The passage is mainly concerned with the present friendly relationship between teachers and students.(先总) The tie has become relaxing and pleasant, but it doesn’t mean that the teachers have lost the power over their students.（后分）(35words) The modern teacher-student relationship mentioned above also exists in my school life. (承上启下，过渡)To achieve this beneficial relation requires students’ cooperation an