2010年2月20日雅思A类写作议论文及点评.doc

2010年2月20日雅思A类写作议论文及点评 真题回放：Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development, but some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 名师点评：说随着经济的发展，人们生活水平的提高，一些社会价值观也渐渐丧失了。问你发展经济，提高人民生活水平的利弊关系。这是一道典型的观点类题目，无论是选用一边倒结构还是对称式结构，都要给出自己的opinion，到底是利大于弊还是弊大于利。就这篇文章来看，利大于弊的观点更符合普遍的价值观。 第一段：It is undeniable that rapid economic development would lead to some side effects including the loss of social values. However, these problems cannot cover the outstanding achievements.As far as I am concerned, advantages of economic development and its disadvantages will coexist for a long time.首段通常都是介绍背景，给出自己观点。 第二段：理由可以试着从以下几个角度切入：在任何国家，只有发展经济，民众的生活水平才能得到改善与提高，这是物质文明。社会价值观属于精神文明。物质文明又是精神文明的基础。 In almost every nation of the world, economic progress is the basis. For instance, due to its powerful economy and the high living standard of the people , the citizens of United States could have high level of social welfare and they enjoy free medical care and free education. Even the poorest people in the States could get the social insurance, which ensures their impossibility to get starved. Take China as another example. During the years of social reform, the manufacturing industry has been improved a lot and the international trade in China was vigorous. Most multinational companies are investing in the country so that the citizens in China would have more opportunities to get a good job and their living standards would be higher. 第三段：然而随着物质文明的发展，也产生了精神文明的缺失，这一点是不可忽视的。尤其是在发展中国家，人们变得越来越拜金，容易堕落，关系冷漠。 On the other hand，with the rapid development of economy，the social values are losing day by day. Especially in some developing countries, some severe situations would occur. For example, in some Asian countries, the problem of illegal prostitutes is becoming more serious，which would meet the needs of some businessmen. Other social values have been lost as well. For instance, in the business world, the colleagues are n