作文模板及范文(Book 1).ppt

Contributors to Changes /Success / Failure in Sth. 1) As can be seen from the graph, there have been sharp changes in the age distribution of drug addicts. 2) To be concrete, the teenage addicts only made up 10 percent of all the drugsters in 1982 while the ratio rose up to 65 in 2002. 3) These changes are most distressing, but the causes Reference model: Changes in the Age Distribution of Drug Addicts Ⅵ. Paragraph Writing 下一页 上一页 for them are not hard to find. 4) First of all, teenagers’ fearless curiosity about everything new has led some of them into this marsh, and now they find it impossible to get themselves out of it. 5) Second, many of the young addicts turned for the first time to drugs for escape either from their failure in the national college entrance exams or from their parents’ breakup. 6) And above all, our education in the harmfulness of drugs has been far from adequate to build teenagers’ Ⅵ. Paragraph Writing 下一页 上一页 THE END Ⅵ. Paragraph Writing sound resistance to drugs. 7) Most addicts admit that they were then too ignorant of drugs to keep themselves away from the lure of the drug traffickers(贩毒者). 8) To sum up, the causes mentioned above must call for more of our concern, and effective measures should be taken to check the trend. 上一页 Why I See/Choose Sth. over Sth. Else Ⅵ. Paragraph Writing 下一页 1. 科研 2. 经商 3. 行医 4. 从教 要求:从四种职业中选出两种进行对比分析,并阐明你的选择倾向和理由. * Doing Sth.—My Most Rewarding Experience(理由陈述) Ⅵ. Paragraph Writing 下一页 Ⅵ. Paragraph Writing 1) As one of my most rewarding experiences, doing something has brought a lot of benefits to my life. （划线部分可替换） 2) For one thing, … (理由I) 3)Unlike…, it offers me much freedom to … Detail 1 4) For another… (理由II) 5)Through …, I have more chances to … Detail 2 6) And the most amazing result of doing so is that… (理由III) 7)Now I tend to … Detail 3 8) In sum, there is not anything in …(my life) that is more beneficial than doing sth. Conclusion Topic Sentence