挑战托福满分作文之例文评论.pdf

大家论坛托福版块 《挑战托福满分作文》 第六章 例文评论 在这个部分中，我们将结合例文的分析，让您充分体验实战提高的感觉。 我们先来看看ETS给出的例文，体验一下什么叫做6分作文。下面有两个题目，每个 题目都有从6分到1分的例文，大家可以阅读并仔细比较，体会一下TWE的评分标准。 SampleTopicA SampleTopicA SSaammpplleeTTooppiiccAA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Teachers should make learningenjoyable and fun for their students. Use specific reasons and examples to supportyouropinion. Essayrating of6 Essayrating of6 EEssssaayyrraattiinnggooff66 Idostronglysupporttheideathatteachersshouldmakelearningenjoyable andfun for the students. This I supportwith the following reasons. Firstletustakethepsychologicalcomponentofastudent.Achildorstudent will be more receptive, to anythingincluding studies, ifthe subjectmatter is presentedin an interestingandenjoyable manner.If notthere is every likelihoodthatthestudentwillbeunwillingorwillrejectthematterpresentedas he considers studyingis a burden on him. My second pointis thatthe presentday studentfaces tremendousamount ofdistractionsuch as interestingtelevision programmes, drugs, distractions fromoppositesexesandmanymore.Togetthestudentawayfromalltheseand to get him interestedin studies there is obviously noother waythan to make learninginteresting. The presentday students are also pressuredwith tremendous amount of competitionfromotherstudents.Withthismountingpressureonthemcoupled withthehughexpectationoftheparents,itwilllightentheburdenontheyoung studentswithamoreacceptableformofpresentationthatisinanenjoyableand fun manner. Retention is anotherfactor that shouldconsideredimportant. Any 1 /forum-64-1.html 大家论坛托福版块 presentationwhichisgivenaninterestingorenjoyablemannercanberetained wellbythestudents.Ifthesubjectmatterpresentedisuninterestingthenthere isstronglikelihoodthestudentwillforgetthesubjectmat