增强书面表达效果的技巧课本.ppt

使用V-ing形式 使用过去分词 使用名词性从句 使用状语从句 使用强调句型 使用定语从句 使用虚拟语气 使用倒装句 使用感叹句 １.With the development of society, ．．．is becoming /has been．．． 2. With the society developing, …plays an extremely important part in …. .we benefit greatly from … 3. As the survey shows, /As we can see from the survey, … 4. Recently, we have a heated discussion on whether… 5. It is known to all that… 6. There are different views concerning this new means. 7. People hold different views towards/ concerning this topic. 8. As the old saying goes, “every coin has two sides. 9. Some hold the opinion that ．．． 10. Some have a positive attitude towards… 11. On the contrary, many others disagree /are against the idea mentioned above. 12. On the other hand, many others complain that… 13. However, the others don’t share the same idea. They complain that… 14.Personally /As for me/ As far as I am concerned, I would like to．．． 15. In my opinion, I prefer … to …/it is better to do A than to do B /to do A is better than to do B 1.TV shopping has been a new means of family shopping. 2.It is convenient, effective as well as trustworthy. 3. All problems can be settled the moment you pick up the phone. All that you have to do is just to pick up the phone, and problems can be solved immediately. 4. The things sold on TV are much too expensive. 5. it is difficult for us to guarantee the quality of goods without examining the goods by ourselves. 6. I am fond of wandering/ strolling in the supermarket. 7. It is far more than / not merely shopping, which also brings us much fun. 　　从以上我们可以看出，要使文章连贯、流畅，就要使用较高级词汇、复杂句子结构以及恰当的连接词，才能给人一种美的享受，才能在考试的评分中得到较高的档次。 　　总之，希望同学们通过以上启发，灵活运用，坚持用科学的方法多写多练，就一定能写出高质量的英语作文，在高考中取得成功。 ? 　　大家看，这篇书面表达要点齐全，表达正确，但语言平淡，表达方式单一，逻辑性差，它很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。如果我们能使用一些恰当的连接词，尽量使用较高级、较复杂的语法结构，就使这个平淡的文章有很大改观，甚至会变得更精彩。 　①用介词短语作定语或用含定语从句的主从复合句。 　②语句间缺少连接成分。 　③表现作者对现在乡村的发展的喜悦心情，也起到承上启下作用。 　④较高级词汇。 　　词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知，运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。大家先来看下面这些句子： 　　有效采用不同的连接