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书面表达评分标准： 北京卷2005年考试说明中的评分标准 情景作文 一、评分原则： 本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 评分时应考虑：内容要点，上下文的连贯，词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。 拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。 Thanks a lot! * How to improve passages Focusing on varieties of words and sentence patterns 1993年高考作文 1 One day my parents went to work in the fields and my little sister and Ar Fu followed. While my parents were working, my sister walked to the river and Ar Fu followed her. She saw a beautiful flower on the bank of the river, she wanted to pick it. She fell into the river. When Ar Fu saw that, it barked and jumped into the river quickly. One day, followed by my little sister and Ar Fu, my parents went to work in the fields. While my parents were working, my sister , with nothing to do, walked to the riverside nearby with Ar Fu. At the sight of a beautiful flower on the river bank, she wanted to pick it. However, she fell into the river. Seeing that Ar Fu barked and jumped into the water as soon as possible. 2 _________________________ _____________ ______________________ ______ _______________ ________ 词汇和句式的多样性 (因为)_____ his help, I finished the work at last. Thanks to As a result of Owing to Due to 因为 Because of /with/for 我花了50块钱买这本字典。 Spend… on/in It costs/takes… to Pay… for… Charge sb… for… I was charged $50 for the dictionary. 我会尽我所能去帮助他。 do/try my best do everything I can do all that I can do what/whatever I can I will to help him. I ’ll help him as much as possible. 高考经典句型结构: 1. It’s years since I worked in Beijing. 2. It won’t be long before you get well. 3.It was not until you told me that I realized my mistake. 4.Not until you told me did I realize my mistake. 5.It is said that a fire broke out last night. 6.There always exist big gaps between dreams and realities. 7.She w