托福写作的规范语法.doc

托福写作的规范语法 　　 　　1. 不完整的句子 　　(1) If you find that writing is hard is because it is hard. One of the hardest things that people do. 　　If you find that writing is hard is because it is hard—one of the hardest things that people do. 　　(2) Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world. A gossip that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them. 　　Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world， a gossip that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them. 　　Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them. 　　2. 分词短语作状语的错误 　　Holding her in his arms， the moon hid behind the cloud. 　　As soon as the moon hid behind the cloud， he held her in his arms. 　　3. 修饰词错位 　　(1) Romeo received word that Juliet was dead from another messenger. 　　Romeo received word from another messenger that Juliet was dead. 　　(2) After leaving the stage， the audience’s applause called the musicians back for an encore. 　　After the musicians left the stage， the audience’s applause called them back for an encore. 　　(3) Disruptive in the classroom， a teacher may become exasperated with hyperactive children. 　　Disruptive in the classroom， hyperactive children may exasperate a teacher. 　　4. 串句 　　Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization， for this reason， employers need to have accurate information about employee performance， but when employees have full access to their own personnel files， co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers. 　　Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization; for this reason， employers need to have accurate information about employee performance. But when employees have full access to their own personnel files， co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers. 　　5. 时态错误 　　The re