Writing Fundamentals.ppt

CONNECTING SENTENCES I realise now that the boys loved me. I was little. I often felt lonely and left out. They were always having fun together. I was too small to play with them. I suppose I was quite independent. CONNECTING SENTENCES I realise now that the boys loved me, but when I was little I often felt lonely and left out. They were always having fun together, but I was too small to play with them. As a result, I suppose I was quite independent Punctuation Basic Sentence Structures It too far from Beiwai, I think you can change your work to Tianjin. It’s too far from Beiwai. I think you can … It’s too far from Beiwai, but I think you can … As it is too far from Beiwai, I think you can … It’s too far from Beiwai, so I think you can … It’s too far from Beiwai; I think you can … It’s too far from Beiwai, and I think you can … Punctuation Basic Sentence Structures My brother like seeing films. The man and her daughter is here. It is early in the morning. I got up before my parents and … Agreement COMMA vs. PERIOD Maria是北京外国语大学的新生，她今年19岁，来自英国。 Maria is a new student at BFSU. She is 19 and is from Britain. LAYOUT OF PASSAGES Indented style Full block style I work at a software company that is located near Fu Xing men, Xicheng district. My home is in Hai-dian District, it’s about 12 kilometre from my workplace. There are many ways to went from my home to my office. It takes almost one hour by bus to get to my workplace from my home. Although it is long journey, The transport is convenient. There are three direct bus service. No 716, No 732 and No 723 with air-condition, the fee of No 716 is very cheap, only 1 Yuan, but No 732 or No 723 are 2 to 3 Yuans. I can also choose to take the subway to save time, but it more expensive and I need to take bus to get to the subway station. I take subway only when I got up late. It spends me about 45 minute and 6 Yuan. The most expensive way to go to work is taxi. It’s really expensive, but not