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官方网站： 托福写作被扣分的因素 摘要：托福写作被扣分的因素，托福写作中有一些会 “遗传”的错误，考生们只顾着 怎样用经典的句子加分，却忽略了打好基础，万丈高楼平地起的道理。在用句措辞不 能保证完全正确的情况下，返璞归真来的更实际，少一些浮夸华丽的辞藻，但也不至 于在托福写作中因诟病而被扣分，以下为大家列出托福写作中需要提防的10个常见错 误。 1、用词不当 学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本 的错误是不能犯的。 In the show, if participators answer twenty problemsthat the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize. problems应改为questions 2、拼写错误 这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。 Inconclusion, issueofwhether parents are thebest teachers isa complex one, requiringsubjective judgement,consequently, thereareno easyor certainanswers. judgement应改为judgment 3、乱用大词 First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they willkeep their salary gingerliness. 这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题： 1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙; 2)although和but是不能连用的; 3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么; 4、表达中式 官方网站： Thesecondargument-itmighthavebeennoticedbyothers-isthatinsomeoccasion, it is quitedifficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are akind of vocation. 该句的表达过于中式化。 5、表意重复 They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends. 前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。 The show is so compelling but attractive. compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。 6、固定用法错误 To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have acomprehensive sense of professional knowledge. To some extends应改为To some extent 7、例证夸张 For example,when a doctorfacesapatientwho has gotcancer,thedoctorcannot tell thetruth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death. 虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。 8、成分多余 According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese AcademyofSocial