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七夕，古今诗人惯咏星月与悲情。吾生虽晚，世态炎凉却已看透矣。情也成空，且作“挥手袖底风”罢。是夜，窗外风雨如晦，吾独坐陋室，听一曲《尘缘》，合成诗韵一首，觉放诸古今，亦独有风韵也。乃书于纸上。毕而卧。凄然入梦。乙酉年七月初七。啸之记。 托福写作辅导材料 托福作文任务描述： 托福作文要求参加考试者在30分钟内进行审题、写作和检查等。写作的字数为220至300字。 分数段： 0分，1分， 1.5分，2分，2.5分，3分，3.5分，4分，4.5分，5分，5.5分，6分。 写作要求： 6分：Demonstrate clear competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels, though it may have occasional errors.能展示出较高的写作能力，在修辞和句法等方面达到定的水平，文章允许出现个别错误。 Effectively addresses the writing task 文章切题，观点明确； Well organized and well developed 段落组织有序，合理展开说明； Uses clear appropriate details to support a thesis or illustrate ideas使用正确的事例支持论点或说明观点； Displays consistent facility in the use of language 能够流畅地，连贯地使用语言 Demonstrate syntactic variety and appropriate word choice. 句式多样，用词准确。 5分：Demonstrate competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels, though it will probably have occasional errors 在修辞、句法方面有一定的表达能力，但文章偶然会有错误。 may addresses some parts of the writing task more effectively than others 能有效地按照要求协作，但某些部分有欠缺； generally well organized and well developed 段落组织基本有序，合理展开说明； Uses clear details to support a thesis or illustrate an ideas能使用事例支持论点或说明观点； Displays facility in the use of language 展现出语言的使用能力； Demonstrate some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary. 有些句式和词汇的变化。 4分：demonstrate minimal competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactical levels 展示出一些写作能力修辞与句法能力一般。 Addresses the writing topic adequately but may slightly parts of the task Is adequately organized and developed Uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea Demonstrate adequate but possibly inconsistent facility with syntax and usage May contain some errors that occasionally obscure meaning 3 分：demonstrate some developing competence in writing, but it remains flawed on either the rhetorical or syntactical level, or both. Inadequate organization or development Inappropriate or insufficient details to support or illustrate generalizations A noticeable inappropriate choice of words or word forms An accumulation of errors i