2014届中考英语 写作复习课件.pptVIP

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Which is better? 1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。 A It rained heavily. So he didn’t catch the school bus. B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain. missed because of 2 我们应该保护环境。 A We should protect the environment. B It’s our duty to protect the environment. Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending） As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending） 只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻 Proverb（谚语） 方法三: 妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。 加谚语(Proverb) 集中注意力于学习 We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies... 加谚语(Proverb) 加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法 Joining the English club is a good way to learn English. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English. Enjoy some proverbs 1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do.  7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 8.All roads lead to Rome. 三思而后行。 熟能生巧。 有志者事竟成。 入乡随俗。 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。 失败是成功之母。 5.The early bird catches the worm. 一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。 条条大路通罗马。 3.Where there is a will, there is a way. 6.Failure is the mother of success. 青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy. 加例子 4. Sentence connection sentences passage Linking words （连接词） Try to use some linking words to make your writing more fluently 连(connect) How do people spend