江苏省苏州市工业园区第十中学中考英语《写作》课件 牛津版.pptVIP

What is his problem? Learning goals: ＊ learn how to make our writing more beautiful； ＊know how to score our writing; ＊try to help people in need .  表转折：but, _______________________… 表递进：and, ______________________… 表顺序：first, ______________________… 表观点：I think,____________________… The scoring standard（作文评分标准） Discussion: (in group of four) What problems do you have? If you are a small teacher, you should ★underline beautiful sentences ★circle mistakes ★write down the score * How to improve your writing By the end of the lesson, we can Help 我在写作方面有许多问题。 I have many problems in writing. 我不知道如何来解决他们。 I don’t know how to deal with them. I don’t know what to do with them. 你能给我一些建议吗？ Can you give me some advice? Can you offer me some suggestions? 你的建议会很有价值。 Your advice will be of great value . Your suggestions will be very valuable . with Tip 1. To be a careful writer linking words（连接词） I have many problems in writing. I don’t know how to deal with them. Can you give me some advice? Your advice will be of great value . ∨ But, However, How to make it more beautiful ? Discuss in pairs: ∧ I hope, I believe, y besides however second, third,…,finally in my opinion Can you tell him more linking words(连接词)? ,what’s more ,although, though Tip 2.To be a thoughtful writer ★Appearance ( neat handwriting and paragraphs) is important. Tip 1.To be a careful writer Tip 2.To be a thoughtful writer proverb 谚语 Tip 3.To be a wise writer Tip 3.To be a wise writer Practice makes perfect. No pains, no gains. What should we pay attention to if we want to make our writing more beautiful? Appearance is very important. more and more mistakes only a few related words or sentences Poor 0-8 more mistakes most of the points ★ Ok 9-12 almost fluent, few linking words, some mistakes complete or most of the points ★★ Good 13-16 fluent, linking words, well-organized complete ★★★ Excellent 17-20 Languages Contents 内容 Appearance Marks B)假如你是第一中学的张磊，随着中考的日