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考研写作3 连俊霞 北京新东方学校 二、短文写作思路形成 3.1 历年有图真题要求汇总 （1）寓意的积极性与消极性？ 5篇积极；9篇消极 （2）题目要求分类？ 14—interpret/explain its intended meaning 10—describe the picture(s)/photo(s)/drawing 10—give your comments/suggestion 4—support your view with examples 2—give your reasons 1—predict the tendency * Writing * 寓意说明段 图画描述段 建议措施段 举例说明段 原因分析段 预测未来段 二、短文写作思路形成 3.2 有图作文思路形成 （1）写作三段论 首段——图画描述段 中间段1——寓意说明段+原因分析段 中间段2——寓意说明段+举例说明段 尾端——建议措施段 * Writing * 消极寓意类 积极寓意类 二、短文写作思路形成 1.2 有图作文思路形成 （2）三段安排 等边六边形结构——三段论 * Writing * 首段 3-4句 中间段5-6句 尾段 3-4句 三、高分范文得分解密 3.1 图画描述段 三至四句(50-55词)：第一句对画面简单概括且配有同位成分；第二三句描述画面内容（两幅图每幅图一句，一幅图找两个因素各一句）；第四句将图画下方中文翻译为英语（如果有） This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture which depicts/describes … The picture shocks us beyond description in that it depicts/describes… * Writing * 3.1 图画描述段 （2004）This is quite an extraordinary and meaningful picture.1 A lad, sweating all over, dashed to the end of racetrack. With triumphant smile on his face, however, he is surprised to find something odd—not far and in front of the ending line, there is an arrowhead, saying “START”.2 For a 5000-meter race, this racetrack does seem strange; but when expanding our vision-field to the whole society, we’ll find almost every track of endeavoring resemble — every end may find （may be found） to be a new start in reality.3 87words * Writing * 分词作定语 分词作定语 插入 强调 分词作状语 3.1 图画描述段 （2009）As is illustrated in the cartoon,1 each (every) person sits in their own work room. In front of them is a computer. Everyone looks at the screen carefully, and communicate(s) with their colleagues through the net instead of talking face to face. Their work places are placed like a net.2 And below the cartoon, there is a topic which says: the near and far among the Internet.3 66words * Writing * 定语从句 三、高分范文得分解密 3.2 寓意说明段+原因分析段 （1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承上启下)；第二句说明原因如下；第三四句一个原因及扩展；第五六句一个原因及扩展。 具体化——切忌以理说理。 （2