《托福写作常用实例》.doc

[1] What made Kaifu Lee leave Carnegie Mellon? Why did he give up the position in Apple? What casting off his position in Google to establish Innovation Works in China in 2009? The answer to all of the questions above can be a simple word, belief. Kaifu’s belief, to contribute all he has towards the education on Chinese youngsters, was gained from his father’s words that “You should always remember that you are Chinese whenever you are, wherever you go; so try to do something for your country.” To insist on this belief, Kaifu had paid much, and now, he is going on to strive with many graduate students in China to make their lives shinning. As a consequence, he eventually did it! Obviously, it is the belief at the bottom of Kaifu’s heart that motivated him to advance. [2] Pieter Zeeman, who shared the 1902 Nobel Prize in Physics with Hendrik Lorentz for his discovery of the Zeeman Effect, also grasps his belief without giving up. When he was in university, he wouldn’t like to strive anymore, as a result of addicted to comfort and extravagant life. His mother was shocked when seeing his grades, with tears in her eyes. That made Zeeman come to his senses. He thought much and became regretted about wasting time and her mother’s expectations. As a consequence, Zeeman was determined to fight, fight for his grades, fight for her mother’s sweet smile. He regarded realizing his goals as motivation. Holding on this belief, Zeeman accomplished his dream. Motivation: The belief at the bottom of one’s heart: Kaifulee, Zeeman the desire of realizing one’s dream: Florence Nightingale, Martin Luther King, Arnold Schwarzenegger The stimulus inside is always the fundamental factor. Undoubtedly, what motivates people to change is the innate desire of realizing one’s dream. Since everyone’s dream is consistent, it is the condition or situation which one believes to be the ultimate truth and one will never cast doubt on it. Definitely, it will not be difficult to find some compelling e