初三作文.ppt

三、时态和语态问题 四、Chinglish 现象 五、行文的逻辑性问题 典型病例 名词的单复数问题 主谓一致问题 时态和语态问题 Chinglish 现象 行文的逻辑性问题 词类错用 请你当老师 书面表达 自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人……这使得……。骑车既可以……，又可以……。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？ ⑤.适当评论, 发表己见。 How friendly they are! We can learn from them. They enjoyed themselves very much. What a happy family. 3.成文之后 ①. 一般语法项目的检查 人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 时态: One day, they are going to the island. 主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English. she改为he are going to 改为went to work改为works in改为with ②. 注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句) Jim works very hard. So does She.(前后主语非同一人) A: Jim works very hard. B: So he does.(前后主语为同一人) He didn’t know where the bookshop was. The boys want to know how they should do it. ③. 符合习惯 My work is very busy. I’m very busy with my work. I very much like it. I like it very much. ④. 书写规范, 卷面整洁。 仔细检查，认真抄写 抓住主题，描写细节 开门见山 发表己见，画龙点睛 收集信息，列出提纲 结尾有力 写作指导 1. 段落和要点：除了回信的开头和结尾外，可以将剩下部分分为介绍北京的公交服务和自己的感受两部分来进行描写。 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：第三人称，第一人称（表达自己的观点） 4. 短语及句型：the bus service in Beijing, bus lines, wait for a bus, the tickets are cheap, take a bus, travel by bus... 5. 写作模板： 段首句： (1). Your grandpa is right. (2). What your grandpa said is right. (3). Your grandpa is not wrong. 中间过渡句： (1). Besides, ... are offered on buses. (2). And you can take buses to... in Beijing. (3). So you dont worry about... 结尾句： (1). In my view, we wont feel bored when... by bus in Beijing. (2). I think its convenient and pleased for us to... in Beijing by bus. (3). I would like... by bus because... 范文 Hi! Tony, Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing. Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Beijing is really good now（结合要点，说明公交服务很好）There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village（使用了there be 句型）. Besides（使用副词，行文连贯流畅自然）, specail seats are offered on buses. people do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap（结合要点