托福写作语言.pdfVIP

托福写作语言 主讲：乐闻携尔 专注出国考试培训与留学申请 课程地址：/course/2744125142 Today’s lecture is about: 1：SIX LESSONS TO LEARN FROM AN ESSAY SCORED 22 2 ：SENTENCE MAKEING 1 zhangwei@806 SIX LESSONS TO LEARN FROM AN ESSAY SCORED 22 “By ignorance we mistake, and by mistakes we learn” 2 zhangwei@806 Starting paragraph • With the development of the society, people become more polite than in the last three decades. • When it comes to whether there is ever a reason for people to be impolite, there are always a host of different opinions held by different individuals. • As far as I am concerned, there is never a reason for people to be rude to another person. SIX LESSONS TO LEARN FROM AN ESSAY SCORED 22 3 zhangwei@806 Starting paragraph • With the development of the society, people become more polite than in the last three decades.(background) • When we don’t have to compete for the limited public resources such as the seats on the bus or the train tickets, we think “lady first” ; when we don’t have to wait in a ridiculous long queue in the supermarket to check out just a box of eggs, we say “after you”. Thanks to the fast development of the society in almost all aspects, this is what happening in China nowadays SIX LESSONS TO LEARN FROM AN ESSAY SCORED 22 4 zhangwei@806 Lesson1 • Be as specific as possible other wise it is very likely that other’s won’t be convinced. SIX LESSONS TO LEARN FROM AN ESSAY SCORED 22 5 zhangwei@806 • Poor: My parents taught me a lot of life experience. • Better: My dad showed me how to tell who is possibly a thief in the railway station; he told me how he got through the hard time when he was first time du