四级作文之常见错误教案分析.pptVIP

四级作文写作 常见写作错误 Contents 5种用词错误分析 6种常见句子错误分析 5种用词错误分析 1) 误解词义导致的用词错误 2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误 3) 大词小词滥用导致的错误 4) 误用词性导致的错误 5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误 1.误解词义导致的用词错误 1）The young man always puts on leather shoes. 2）Both salt and sugar are easy to melt in hot water. 3) They persuaded their son to try again, but he just turned a deaf ear to them. 4) Please fetch/take me some water when you return this afternoon. 5) It is uneasy for the children to do such a thing. 1.误解词义导致的用词错误 1）The young man always puts on leather shoes. put on 表示穿的动作，不表示穿着的状态，而此句表达的意思是“穿着”，而不是“穿上” The young man always wears leather shoes. 1.误解词义导致的用词错误 2）Both salt and sugar are easy to melt in hot water. melt 常指物体经过加热后熔化或者易溶物质受热溶化，不指溶质在溶剂中溶解 Both salt and sugar are easy to dissolve in hot water. 1.误解词义导致的用词错误 3) They persuaded their son to try again, but he just turned a deaf ear to them. persuade sb. to do sth. 是“说服某人去做某事”。如果persuade 用过去时或者完成时，则意味着对方已经接受劝告而去做某事了。但此句的第二部分用了he just turned a deaf ear to them，这在词义上造成了前后矛盾的逻辑错误。 They advised their son to try again, but he just turned a deaf ear to them. 1.误解词义导致的用词错误 4) Please fetch/take me some water when you return this afternoon. Fetch表示的是“去拿来”，表示来回而不是单程。Take表示“拿走”。从该句的意思看来，指单程“拿来”。 4) Please bring me some water when you return this afternoon. 1.误解词义导致的用词错误 5) It is uneasy for the children to do such a thing. Uneasy是由前缀un-加词根easy构成，在古英语中有表示“不容易”的意思，但在现代英语中，uneasy 已经不表示easy的反义“不容易”了，而是“心神不安”的意思。 5) It is difficult for the children to do such a thing. 分辨同义词近义词的细微差别是避免发生错误的主要途径。 选用自己完全掌握了词义或用法的单词或词组进行写作。 2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误 We all hope him to get the first prize. Mr. Smith denied my invitation to a dinner party. Who is responsible for this department? She will probably be elected woman chairman. There are jobs more dangerous than truck driving, for an instance, training lions. 2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误 We all hope him to get the first prize. Hope 的用法只有hope to do sth.或hope+that从句结构，却不能说hope sb. to do sth. We all expect him to get the first prize. 2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误 2) Mr. S