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一 、句子的标准 1.一致性：一个好的句子，如果所包含的思想松散不一；表达不出完整的思想，则不具备一致性。 Eg: 1) Born in a small village over fifty years ago, and later he became a scientist. ( He was born in a small village over fifty years ago, and later he became a scientist. 2) The boy is too young.( The boy is too young to take care of himself. 3）Being a process of mentally interpreting written symbols, he likes reading very much.( Reading is a process of mentally interpreting written symbols and he likes it very much. 4) Although tired and exhausted, the work was finished on time.( Although tired and exhausted, he finished the work on time. 句子的一致性决定了句子的意思是否完整，为了做到这一点，我们应该注意以下几点： 不要中途改变句子主语 Eg: Birds have a special protective device, the approach of cold weather can be sensed, they fly south , and we know that winter is coming.( Birds have a special protective device, they can sense the approach of cold weather, so when they fly south, we know that winter is near. (2) 不要把完整的意思隔开 Eg： Foreign goods have new features and designs. The same domestically produced goods haven’t got.( Foreign goods have new features and designs which the same domestically produced goods haven’t got. Eg；In extensive reading, our main purpose is not to learn new structures and vocabularies, but to understand as quickly and completely as possible the ideas being communicated. ( In extensive reading, our main purpose is not to learn new structures and vocabularies but to understand as quickly and completely as possible the ideas being communicated. Eg: People have been fascinated by the Bermuda Triangle for years. Because of the mysterious disappearance of many ships and planes in the area. ( People have been fascinated by the Bermuda Triangle for years because of the mysterious disappearance of many ships and planes in the area. Eg: We naturally assumed that they had arrived there. They left several hours ago. ( We naturally assumed that they had arrived there, for they left several hours ago. (3) 摆正集子中各部分之间的逻辑关系 Eg：We were coming to se