2015年高三读写任务复习专题_(公开课)详解.ppt

HOW TO WRITE PROPER TOPIC SENTENCES In China, people , especially youngsters, are becoming more and more conscious of their looks and are willing to go to great lengths to make themselves look more attactive. Plastic surgery (外科医生) is becoming popular with young people. Ding Xiaobang, a plastic surgeon at the Peking Union Medical College Hospital, said that in the past decade, he had seen a growing number of patients, who were young and naturally good looking because they see plastic surgery as the key to love, wealth and success. But just a few days ago, it took the life of a pop singer in China. Wang Bei, 24, a former singer on Super Girl, died on Nov.15 during plastic surgery in Wuhan, Hubei . The young singer’s jaw suddenly started bleeding during the procedure, blocking her throat and causing her to suffocate(窒息而死). Wang’s death has raised concerns about the dangers of plastic surgery in China. The Ministry of Health stepped in on Nov 27, calling on health authorities all over China to increase supervision of the country’s medical plastic surgery industry. It also told the Hubei health department to look into Wang’s death and “to make the results of the investigation public as soon as possible”. [写作内容] 1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容。 2. 然后以120词就“The price of beauty”为题进行议论， 内容包括 （1）分析中国整容手术的现状及青少年进行整容手术的原因。 （2）分析整容手术带来的危害。 （3）你认为怎样对待自己的外貌。 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。 得18-20分； 2.包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。得14-17分。 3.包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。 得11-13分。 4.包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得7-11分。 5.只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得4-6分。 2013年广东高考读写任务写作内容部分评分细则 Criteria [评分标准] 读写任务写作（25分） 概括（5分）概括全面，表述清晰 写作内容（20分）: 主题明确，内容丰富 既可以避免考生在写作时跑题或遗漏要点，又方便阅卷老师不用刻意寻找而能一