2013-2014海淀区高三上学期英语期中考试重点分析.ppt

* 评 分 原 则 1. 本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 评分时应考虑：文章是否扣题，结构是否完整，内容是否充实、健康，思维是否活跃，逻辑是否清晰，语言是否规范，交际是否得体。 4. 拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5. 词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。 人大附开放作文展示 可接受的立意 1.从独行的一个人的角度：处于领先，却选择走楼梯，适合的方式，最有效率；灵活与古板；具体问题，具体分析；…… 2.从众人的角度：选择走电梯，却效果不好，从众、跟风，欲速则不达；省力与费力；…… 另外，传统与现代；守旧与创新；懒惰与勤劳；…… 描图、解图、圆图、交际性 I think the picture is trying to tell us that we should not follow others blindly. As you can see, crowds of people are waiting to take the escalator while a man holding bags is walking upstairs on the steps. It is obvious that the man is closer to the destination than most people on the escalator, because these people fail to notice the crowded situation and still believe it is more convenient and energy-saving. Actually, if they do not blindly follow others, they can walk upstairs quickly as well.  Similar things happen in our daily life. We often choose to follow others instead of making a wiser choice after analyzing our situation. As a result, we may waste a lot of time and energy without achieving our goals.  Therefore, we should not learn from the followers, instead we should make our own decision. 人大附开放作文 清华附开放作文 As I see it, the picture vividly shows that it is important not to follow others blindly. What makes me think so is the strange yet common phenomenon demonstrated in the picture. As you can see, a crowd of people are following others, waiting to go upstairs by taking the escalator. However, they have not noticed that the one who takes stairs is almost on the second floor. If they, especially the last several, do not blindly follow others and choose to walk upstairs, they may find that they can be even quicker than the first several on the escalator.  This kind of phenomenon is rather common in the subway stations, and they do remind me of many people in our daily life, who often choose to follow others without analyzing the situation they are in. As