2013年上半年六级写作的思路指导及范文.doc

2013年上半年六级写作的思路指导及范文 1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”. You may cite some examples to support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 难度： 典型的谚语警句型的文章，相比其他三篇难度低很多，谚语本身非常好理解，并且是最好用谚语警句模板套用的一篇。 思路： 第一段：开篇引用＋表义（微笑缩短了人与人的距离）＋深意（生活中，我们应该微笑面对他人） 第二段：正能量（微笑的魔力，比如可以让我们交到更多朋友，可以化解尴尬，对于商家来说微笑可以带来更多商机等，还可反面论证一下，没有了微笑， 生活就会失去温暖和色彩，等等）＋举例（必须要举例！题目要求了。可以写某企业微笑服务取得成功，或者你自己参加面试因为微笑所以获得面试官认可等） 第三段：再次强调微笑的重要性＋我们自己具体应该怎么做 范文： A smile, as the proverb has it, is the shortest distance between two people. In other words, a smile could serve as a bridge to connect two people and shorten the distance between two hearts. Simple as the remark may sound, it conveys a thought-provoking notion that we should always be friendly and polite to other people. First and foremost，a smile proves to be the most effective way to break the ice between two strangers. In addition, being warm-hearted and friendly could promote mutual understanding and friendship. Those who always wear a warm smile are sure to be more popular than those who treat others with coldness and indifference. Zhu Dan is a case in point. She is said to practice smiling in front of the mirror for hours everyday before walking up onto the stage. Finally, she becomes one of the most famous hostesses in China. To conclude, nothing can be more effective than a warm smile in bringing people closer. Hence, it is advisable for people to open their mind and treat others with sincerity and warmth. Only in this way can we win more friends. 2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Good habits result from resisting temptation”. You may cite some examples support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 难度： 谚语本身的难度大于上一个题目，resist和temptation两个词对部分学生有一定难度，但其实都是四六级词汇啊！！ 思路： 第一段：开篇引用＋深意（这里直接写深意就可以了：生活中充满了