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Writing Task I: 主题句 ****What is a topic sentence? ****The two parts of a topic sentence--------topic and controlling idea **** A topic sentence should be neither too narrow nor too specific. **** A concluding sentence serves three purposes a. It signals the end of the paragraph. (Use an end-of-paragraph signal such as “In conclusion”, “In summary”, “Finally” etc.) b. It summarizes the main points of the paragraph. c. It gives a final comment on your topic and leaves the reader with the most important ideas to think about. Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness. Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics. Registering for college classes can be a frustrating experience for new students. Model 1: Paragraph structure Gold Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics. First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion. Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purposes, Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever. For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was minted twenty-three centuries ago. Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science. For many years, it has been used in hundreds of industrial applications. The most recent use of gold is in astronauts’ suits. Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection outside the spaceship. In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty, but also for its use. Hurricanes Hurricanes, which are also called cyclones, exert tremendous power. These violent storms are often a hundred miles in diameter, and their winds can reach velocities of seventy-five miles per hour or more. Furthermore, the strong winds and heavy rainfall that accompany them can completely destroy a small town in a couple of hours. The energy that i