简单句写作精讲.ppt

基础写作;;;二、句子结构要完整 一个句子必须有主语和谓语。两个或两个以上的句子，要么是并列句，要么是主从复合句。两个句子不能直接写在一起，也不能只用逗号隔开，否则会导致句子结构不完整。;;3、The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor. The girls cleaned the desks and chairs; the boys mopped the floor. The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys mopped the floor.;注意;一、改错;3、The old man likes listening to radio programs, radios can be very noisy. The old man likes listening to radio programs, although radios can be very noisy. 4、Seeing from the space, the earth looks beautiful. Seen from the space, the earth looks beautiful. ;二、翻译;4、这支钢笔书写流畅。 The pen writes smoothly. 5、我们没有决定去哪里。 We didn’t decide where to go. 6、花园里有很多蝴蝶。 There are a lot of butterflies in the garden. ;高级简单句;Li Ming didn’t finish his work, so he was criticized by his teacher. (用分词改成简单句） Not finishing his work, Li Ming was criticized by his teacher. 她出生于北京的一个工人家庭，5岁就开始打乒乓球。（用过去分词短语） Born into a worker’s family in Beijing , she began to play table tennis at the age of 5.;二、使用介词with的复合结构 现在分词 过去分词 with + n./pron. + 不定式 形容词 副词 介词短语 这种复合结构多作状语，介词短语、副词、形容词表示宾语所处的状态或特征。; 1、由于得到许多人的帮助，最终我成功了。 With so many people helping me , I succeed at last. 2、那项工作做完以后，我们就去中国度假了。 With the job finished, we went to China for a holiday. 3、有这些人的帮忙，她试着写一篇论文。 With these people to help her, she tried to write a paper. ; 4、他经常开着窗睡觉。 He often sleeps with the windows open. 5、约翰不在, 我们有了更多的地方。 ? With John away, weve got more room. 6、卫兵手持枪站在门口。 ? The guard stood at the gate with a gun in his hands. ;1、那个男孩低着头站在那儿。 The boy stood there, with his head down. 2、I couldn’t do my homework. All that noise went on.(用with的复合结构改成简单句) I couldn’t do my homework with all that noise going on.;三、使用形容词短语作状语 形容词短语作状语一般用逗号隔开，根据情况可位于句首、句末，也可位于句中，相当于一个从句。 Rich in tourist resources, Beijing attracts a great number of vis