高分高考英语作文(校公开课).pptVIP

The Beauty of Writing;Why is writing so tough?;高考作文高分卷的特点;; 你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛， 就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足睡眠 2. 提高学习效率 3. 增加自主学习时间 注意： 1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3. 辩论稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that ;语法篇;这第一句写的…; I strongly recommend that This is right we as a senior high student…. ; I strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.;你再看这开头……; I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows. ;这动词错的…;Short student’s time in school can have a good effect on study, it can important for student’s study xiaolu, and increase student’s own time. ;原来改书面表达就是改错……; In my opinion, we must have enough time to study, but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep, either of them are important. Because of we have time to relax, we can study energetic. Reduce study time also can improve the quality of our school life. ;这词汇…;;你再看这词汇…;;欣赏一下这篇文章的句式结构…; If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time, study efficiently is expected to be enhanced. Moreover, extra-curricular time will make up more of the students’ schedule. That is to say, chances are we can make a better use of our time. ;卷面篇;养眼的…;;;;;;;;;当批到下午两点看到了它们…;太挤了;太乱了;太空了;太潦草了;太花了;太没谱了;太没脸了;老师最恨的作文…;大锅，标点呢？段呢？;姐，你长发及腰的字体难掩你每句都错的事实啊！;神，你别抄阅读理解行不？俺们也会看试卷的！;老师最喜欢的作文…;Great minds think alike!;一点提示…;好练的字;笔;笔;过长;答题不可越界;作文五档：（ 从教师阅卷印象角度划分）;Three Rules:;Five Steps:;;高考英语写作中怎样使用复杂结构;;怎样运用复杂结构：;2. 使用不定式;4. 使用v-ing形式;What is the most important is that;6. 使用定语从句;7. 使用虚拟语气;8. 使用倒装句、感叹句;高考英语写作中要学会使用恰当的关联词; III.常用的连接词 1.?表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：what’s more; besides; also; moreover; in addition 2. 表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.;3. 表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thu