李青 英语写作公开课.pptVIP

Writing Argumentation;教学目标;高考作文高分卷的特点 ( 五美 );词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。like→be fond of / be addicted to help→do sb a favor / lend sb a hand 句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。 衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。 ; 你校英语社团部要组织一次英语辩论赛， 就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足睡眠 2. 提高学习效率 3. 增加自主学习时间 注意： 1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3. 辩论稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that ;第一步 认真审题(analyze the requirements) 第二步 谋篇布局(draw up an outline) 第三步 联句成篇(organize the sentences) 第四步 锦上添花(get the article polished up) 第五步 查漏补缺 (check the mistakes);;Writing Model;逻辑角度;school should reduce students’ study time to eight hours a day. the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. ;I strongly recommend that school should shorten the time, during which students are kept in school, to eight hours. It is urgent to carry out the measure. ;If the time is reduced, we can have more time to sleep. Only by reducing the time of school can we gain more time to sleep.; Compared with a long boring school day, students will be happy with the change. 2. Cutting the school time will give us more time which can be controlled by ourselves. ;从句要用得妙 ; First of all / Firstly, More and more students feel tired and sleepy during the classes because of the lack of sleep, which will do harm to their health and study. What’s more / Secondly, …… In addition / Thirdly,……;Writing Time:;Show Time:;too crowded;in a mess;go off topic;punctuation？paragraph？;Don’t copy the reading comprehension！;The composition we all like best!;Beautiful writing!;Beautiful vocabularies!;;作文五档：（ 从教师阅卷印象角度划分）;Let’s enjoy some excellent compositions!;;Works of excel