英语基础作文2 给要去出国的同学一封信.pptVIP

Do remember the writing procedures: Step 1: List the key points. Step 2: Make up sentences. Step 3: Form a passage and polish it. 1. 写信要注意：1) 格式 (format )  2) 如何提建议？ 2. 掌握“列举”时常用的结构。 3. 审清题目要求，以免遗漏要点。 (本次作文中有同学漏了“你的祝 愿” “remain modest and outgoing”要点) 4. 把握语境，准确措辞。 How to begin an advise letter? 1. Leave the readers a good impression with a good layout: How to write an advise letter? 2. How to list your advice： 表列举： Firstly,…Secondly,…Finally …, First, … Second, … Finally On the one hand , on the other hand To begin with / To start with / First of all, … Then … Finally / Eventually, … 表递进： furthermore; moreover; not only...but also...; in other words; besides; meanwhile; at the same time； (注意连贯（coherence）和逻辑(logic)，合理使用连接词或短语） 3. A perfect ending ! （简明） In a word, I hope you will adapt quickly to /adjust yourself to your life there. Anyway, I hope you can get used to your new life and get along/on well with your classmates. 4. Mind your wording and use very polite terms! 1) 写的是建议和忠告（不是命令, must??）。 2) 写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点 (人称：you and me/I)； 写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告 (人称： you and we/us)。 3) 注意：写信的原因明确，建议简明扼要，建议的理由入情入理，语气要礼貌。 Practice wording by correcting the mistakes in the following sentences: 1. I wish you can get on well with everything. I hope you can get on well with everything. I wish you could get on well with everything. 如何使用hope 和 wish？ hope or wish? I hope for a car. 我希望买部车。 I wish for an airplane . 我很想有架飞机。 I hope youll be better soon . I wish I were ten years younger . We wish you a happy New Year . （wish 可跟双宾语和复合宾语） I wish you to have a good stay there. 2.I suggest you making more friends among your classmates. I suggest you/your making more friends with your classmates.I suggest you make more friends with your classmates.