高考英语写作 怎样让句子更精彩.docVIP

我们英语写作都是先从中文下手，先写出中文句子，再转换成英文句子，所以有人说，写英语作文其实就是一个翻译的过程。那如何把这个句子翻译好呢？ （举一个例子作具体示范） 例子 1，造好中文句子：由于长时间看电视眼睛坏了，好多同学带起了眼睛。 2，后想怎么表述，从小词组到大句子，先把主要内容翻出来 Watch TV for long hours 或spend long hours watching TV do harm to eyes 或bad eyesight wear glasses 3，如何把它们合在一起，先要找到它们之间联系，是因果，转折，伴随，条件，还是修饰？ 找出关系来，就知道改用什么词组，或什么句型连起来了。 比如这个是因果，那表因果的该用什么词组或句型呢？due to, lead to, because of 原因状语从句 或 用doing 作状语 或with 的形式 4，写出英文句子 Watching TV for long hours hurts students’ eyes, so they have to wear glasses.(状从) Watching TV for long hours, many students get a bad eyesight and have to wear glasses.(分词作状语) With long hours spent on TV, many students get a bad eyesight and have to wear glasses. (with形式) (Watching TV for long hours does harm to students’ eyes, which makes them wear glasses.（非限制性定从） 所以大家可以看到，无论怎么结合，都可以组成很好的句子。 总结一下，写好句子也并非难事，大家注意这几种整合句子的方法 一 从句型 定从 许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。 Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers. 以 下 同 理 2，因特网广泛使用，人们可以随时发送或接受邮件 people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. 3，这行为是可耻的，影响了中国形象。 The poor behavior has done great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful 4. 任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。 Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price. 名从 1. 无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure. 2. 无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。 There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it. 3许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，用自行车的人数会减少，自行车可能会消亡，many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. 4. 必须指出学习只能靠自己。 It must b