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改写作文题 如何改写作文题目 How to paraphrase the rubric The treatment of criminals has been open to debate in recent years.Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education or job training? 1.加上常用句型：There is much controversy over whether to send criminals to jails or to let them receive education or job training. 2.改变句子成分的顺序: Some pople think that to send criminals to jails is better than to let them receive education or job training. 3.改变句子成分: Some people think that imprisonment is better than education or job training in treating criminals. In some countries, such as Britain, it is a convention that police do not carry guns. Some people believe that it will make citizens unprotected, but some suggest that it would reduce violence in society. Discuss those two views? 1.加上常用句：There is a perception that police without carrying guns will make citizens unprotected, while a counter-argument is that it would reduce violence in society. 2.改变句子成分的顺序：Some people think that citizens would be unprotected if the police carrying no guns, while some suggest that violence could be reduced. 3.改变句子成分：Some people think that police carrying no guns fails to protect citizens while some suggest it would minimize voilence in society. 篇二：解析雅思小作文题干改写 图表题是备考雅思写作小作文中常见的题型之一。通常小作文要求字数不低于150个单词，并且官方建议写作时间不超过20分钟，分值约占写作部分的三分之一。由于占分比例比大作文低，经常被很多考生所忽略。但事实上，这类题型非常好拿分，因为其描述语言相对大作文来说更为固定，句型和用词上也相对较单一，如果考生能掌握固定的写法，和一些相应的语言搭配，往往更容易掌握这种题型，因此，这类题型其实是短期内提高分数的一个突破口。今天，我们先来学习一下小作文之题干改写的策略。 雅思小作文图表题题型包括线图、饼图、柱状图和表格这四种题型，外加一种组合图，比如考试时同时出现一张线图，和一张柱状图。无论是写哪一种图形，我们在考试时，第一句话永远都是改写题干。这就是小作文的固定套路，也是一个得分点。但是笔者在实际教学时发现，有很多同学不知道如何去改，改哪些地方，那么今天我们就来仔细谈一下如何提高这一部分。要知道，题干改写是文章的开头第一句话，一个良好的开头是高分的一半。我们拿真题来举个例子： 剑3真题： The graph blew shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. 以上这句话是考试时所给的题干，很多没有经过培训的同学看到这种题干就会照抄，这样做当然会扣分。因此，我们在备考时，大家需要总结这样的题干应该如何去改写，如总结题干中的show我们应该怎么处理，题干中的时间表达 between March 1993 and March 1999应该如何去改写。 【高分版】 The graph indic