雅思写作 动态图 柱图+表图.ppt

写作讲评之改错 动词缺失 From 1912 to 2001, the number of female far more than the number of male. 主语不当 From 1977 to 2000 saw significantly increase from 1372 to 21672 in the number of female. 介词 Male and female arrived at a peak at 2001. 各种混乱的错误 There was a massive reduce in the number of Britain female living above the age of 100, which drop by above one second from 2716 in 1935 to 1372 in 1977. There was a massive growth in the number of male, which increase by about six times. There was a surge go up, in 1977 with 8127, and 12936 in 2001. Although the total from 417 to 21672, the number of male grew from 230 in 1912 to 12936 in 2001. From 1935 to 1977, it was surged, climed 7105 动词使用错误 While between 1977 to 2001 the number of female was increase sharply. 1912 1935 1977 2001 Male 230 1022 8127 12936 Female 417 2716 1372 21672 Total 647 3738 9499 34608 优秀范文赏析 The table describes how many people lived above the age of 100 in UK during four decades. As can be seen from this table, the number of males living above the age of 100 in Britain witnessed an increasing trend during the four decades. More specifically, there were 230 males living above the age of 100 in 1912.By 1935, the number of males who lived above the age of 100 was approximately four time as many as what it was in a1912. In 2001, the amount of males living above the age of 100 in Britain increased to 12936. By contrast, the number of females fluctuated in the four decades. 417 female lived above the age of 100 in Britain in the year 1912. In the following 23 years, it rose significantly to 2716 people. However, the number dropped dramatically to 1372 people in 1977. in 2001, there were 21672 women living above the age of 100, which is about 16 times as many as that of 1977. Overall, the total number of people living above the age of 100 increased from 647 to 34608 from 1912 to 2001. males showed an upward trend while female witnessed variation 动态柱图类似于线图描写 侧重描写同一事物在不同时间内的变化 1.动态表格写法类似线图，但是侧重对关键数据的提取以及对数据的分类