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* 短文改错 （Error Correction） 旧题新作 In order encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing activity on April 10, on that the weather was nice. At 8:00 am, we gather at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for a top in high spirits. All the way they were chating, singing, laughing but enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours late, we all reached for the top. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school works, it also increased the friendship among us. How a wonderful time. ∧ to which work What gathered later the and we Steps of correcting a composition Step I ________________________________________ Step II _______________________________________ Step III ______________________________________ Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .( 浏览全文 ，掌握大意 ） Read the passage sentence by sentence carefully and find the mistakes. ( ) 分句阅读，逐行找错 Read the passage for the third time, and check the answers carefully. （再次审读，检查核对） 一般为100词左右的记述文为主 How do you deal with the passage? How should we find mistakes in the sentence? Correct the mistake if it is easy to find at first sight. 错误分析 In order encourage the students to take outdoors exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing activity on April 10, on that the weather was nice. At 8:00 am, we gather at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for a top in high spirits. All the way they were chating, singing, laughing but enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours late, we all reached for the top. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school works, it also increased the friendship among us. How a wonderful time. ∧ to which