四级写作评分标准及见错误解析.doc

四级作文评分标准及常见错误解析 根据自己近几年对英语四级的研究以及自己的切身经历，我讲英语作文中常见的错误给同学们做了一个简单的小结，希望同学们看后能有所启发 评分标准 　　2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 　　5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 　　8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 　　11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 　　14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。) 1. 主语缺失 　　1)In our country feels very free. 　　People feel free in our country. 　　2)In my hometown aren’t very busy. 　　People in my hometown are very busy. 　　2. 非名词主语 　　1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life. 　　Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life. 　　2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. 　　Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible. 　　3. 主谓错位 　　1)Reading books can acquire knowledge. 　　People can acquire knowledge from books. 　　2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV. 　　Now people can’t do without TV. 二、谓语错误 　　1. 多重谓语 　　1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated. 　　In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks. 　　2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad. 　　Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty. 　　2. 非动词谓语 　　1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it. 　　Some people firmly agree, but others are against it. 　　2)It is said that the place worths touring. 　　It is said that the place is worth touring. 　　3. 主谓不一致 　　1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English. 　　I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English. 　　2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data. 　　I use a disk because it holds plenty of data.. 　　4. 误用词组 　　1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them. 　　They insist that post-graduate study is very important for t