2010年中考英语满分作文 人教新目标版.docVIP

中考英语满分作文 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于 60 词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假如你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并淡谈你的感受。 Hi! Liu Jing， My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself．He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now，and people can go anywhere by bus．Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon． Yours， Tony Hi! Tony， Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing．_______ If you have more questions，please ask me． Yours， Liu Jing 名师解析 1．试题解读 这则书面表达要求考生写一则回信，内容涉及北京良好的公交服务。公交服务与考生日常生活息息相关，故该写作任务所涉及的写作内容具体，只要平时稍作留意应会有所了解。动手写作时能详细加以表达。但写作要求中不仅涉及介绍，还涉及谈论感受，故考生应注意表达内容全面，不可遗漏要点，所表达观点尽量有自己的独特性，这样才能在数篇中考作文中脱颖而出。 2．写作信息要点 ① 回信的基本客套语； ② 介绍北京良好的公交服务； ③ 谈论自己对北京公交服务的看法。 3．可用素材 (1) 词汇： bus service，excellent，seat，environment，wait for a bus，tickets，cheap，good manners，take，bus lines，spend (2) 句式： ① Its right that your grandpa says that the bus service in Beijing is very good now． ② Its true that the bus service in Beijing is very good now． ③ There is no trouble for your grandpa to go anywhere in Beijing． ④ There are bus lines all over． ⑤ I believe your grandpa will enjoy our good bus service here． 4．注意事项 (1) 写回信应对来信中所提及的问题有针对性地进行回答，不可避重就轻； (2) 注意正确使用信件的格式； (3) 介绍北京良好的公交服务应为本文的重点写作内容； (4) 注意避免表达的语言平淡化。 满分文展示 1 Dear Tony， Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing． (①What your grandpa say is right．)The bus service in Beijing is now really very good．(②As a matter of fact，buses play an important role in our daily life．)(③Its very convenient to travel everywhere because there are bus lines all over，even to villages．)There are bus stops here and there，so you neednt wait for a long time．Whats more，the tickets are very cheap．(④The drivers are not only good at driving