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四步作文法 1. 审题 （列写提纲） 2. 写主题句 3. 段落的写作 4. 修改完善 审题 （02年6月） 1. 上图所示为1990年、1995年、2002年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化； 2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）； 3. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。 这类作文是就一种现象进行分析之后提出观点，前面一部分要求把这种现象讲述清楚，属说明性质，后面一部分要求作者表明态度，属议论性质。两段轻重关系平等，字数分配可均匀，图表型作文首段还应根据数据对图表趋势进行描写。 1这是一所大学里学生所购书籍的结构变化 2. 你对于学生选择书籍类别变化的评论 3 你哪类书籍卖得多？ 说明原因 1985 1995 2005 Philosophy and Society 45% 23% 13% Novels 33% 17% 5% Foreign Languages 11% 31% 39% Computer Science 2% 19% 30% Others 9% 10% 13% 第一段在描述图表的时候，应该做些简单的数学换算，而不是将图表中的数字原原本本照抄，因为读者自己在图表中可以看数字，无需作者再重新列出。这种图表文章常要用到的词有increase, decrease, go up, come, down, decline, drop, fluctuate, rise等。第一段引入具体数据描述大学生购书类别的变化。第二段评述引起这种变化的原因，如学生未来工作极需要外语和计算机知识，因特网的存在使许多流行小说能够在网上阅读。第三段评述个人选择的具体原因并作解释。 The table shows the changes of students’ choices of various kinds of books from 1985 to 2005. Obviously enough, the number of novels and books of philosophy and society has declined gradually, while foreign languages books and computer science ones enjoy much more popularity. Though different readers have their own particular taste, this phenomenon involves several complicated factors. Firstly, nowadays, most of the college students tend to buy more books concerning foreign language learning and computer science, mainly because there is a pressing need of foreign languages and computer skills for their future employment. Secondly, novels are still popular though the sales decreased thanks to the availability of the Internet. Most of popular books could be read online. I always buy books of computer science, firstly because it is my major. Secondly, it is well known that computer science often witnesses the fastest changes, thus in order to keep up with the pace, I have to constantly arm myself with new information. （99年6月） Reading Selectively or Extensively? 1.有人认为读书要有选择 2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的看法 这类文章要求前两段分别陈述两种不同的观点，最后一段说明作者的观点。在词汇的使用上，最常用的有 some people hold…while others think/ some people are in favor of …, others insist / so