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【审题】本文是一篇现象评述类作文。提纲所给框架十分清晰：开篇引出该现象，并简单评论；第二段陈述选择老师时所考虑的因素（两到三点即可），注意条理清楚；最后一段指出该做法的好处以及可能的问题，注意内容和语言的概括性（好处和问题分别阐述一至两点即可）。 范文点评 ? ? 第一段：引出大学允许学生自由选择任课教师的现象，并简单评述其影响，结尾引出下文。 ? ? ? ? 第二段：分三点陈述选择教师时所考虑的主要因素，采用从主到次的顺序。 ? ? ? ? ? ? 第三段：首先指出这种做法分别给教师和学生带来的好处；然后简要阐述可能出现的问题。 Students Selecting Their Lecturers Nowadays many universities （1）entitle the students to choose freely the teachers for some courses, （2）which is welcomed by most students, and is becoming the focus of the students and teachers concern. （3）There are many factors which will influence the students choosing a teacher. （4）First of all, （5）it is generally accepted that a teachers professional knowledge and ability is the most important factor, since students choose his course to learn knowledge. （4）Moreover, （5）quite a few students think teaching methods and skills are essential to a good teacher. He must know how to teach. （4）In addition, a teachers humor sense is also often an important factor many students will consider. ? ?Undoubtedly, free choosing of teachers （6）are very beneficial to both teachers and students. （7）On one hand, it can provide a good chance for a teacher to prove and show his ability. （7）On the other hand, by this way, students can choose teachers they like and obtain more initiative in learning. （8）However, since it is a free choice, few excellent teachers will become the focus of most students choosing, （9）which will lead to an unreasonable class size and influence teaching effect seriously.?? ??? ? ? （1）使...有权利做某事 ? （2）引导非限制性定语从句 ? （3）承上起下 ? （4）条理清楚　 ? ? （5）注意变换句式 ? ? ? ? （6）对...有益 ? （7）条理清楚 ? ? （8）表转折：注意关系副词的使用 （9）引导非限制性定语从 作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！ 　　高分作文标志:　　1：是否长短句交叉；沪江四六级 　　2、是否会使用插入语；　　3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； ??? 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；?????5、句型使用是否准确、地道。　　下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 　　1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月