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雅思作文评判标准及参考范文 　　雅思考试的评分标准包括四个方面： 　　Task Response 　　Coherence and Cohesion 　　Lexical Resource 　　Grammatical Range and Accuracy 　　雅思的4Gates就是其评分标准，分别为“内容”，“逻辑结构”，“语法的准确使用和范围”以及“词汇量”四个标准。根据下面的全面修改案例，读者可以清楚的看到一篇5.5分的雅思范文是如何在修改之前蜕变成为高分作品。 　　Cambridge 8 – Test 2 　　Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. 　　In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? 　　Has this become a positive or negative development? 　　原文： 　　Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. 　　Yes, the technology has changed the people’s interaction in very enhanced manner. Earlier people use to wait and try to find easy way to contact their friends or relatives leaving far. In past there was no quick technology to contact or to establish any communication between one person to another person. The drawback with past communication systems was that it were very slow and were time taking process such as telegrams, letter etc. People used to afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their love ones due to insecure medium of communication. When it comes to professional level, the privacy and accuracy should be maintain but, to that time there were no secure communications. 　　Now the things have changed around, people from far distance contact their loves one in an easy and quick ways which improves the interaction level between two person. Quality the level of the interaction between people to people, has improved because the people are equipped with high-tec technology which enhances the communication. There are many many medium which are available now such as internet, called cards etc. 　　The technology has provided the mobility faster which help people to talk or to interact at any time anywhere in the world. 　　People can contact their friend or relatives any time they want. It has become so easier and feriendly to be in touch with your feriends, relatives even with the unknown pe