考研英语写作在修改练习及作文点评——团结就是力量.docVIP

【写作原文】 In this vivid picture,a big stone was jack-up by little blades of green grass,though this looks strange.The picture means that union give strength. It’s an obvious fact that a person’s strength is limited, the power of people is unlimited,especially when we stumble and fall. But to beat emeny we must use collective force.It has been proved in people work together to combat disaster in Sichuan earthquake .In this natural disaster, a strong unity of the Chinese people unprecedented concerted efforts of one mind, though some lost their lives , some lost their home and some other lost t