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* 故事类文章 (2012·福建高考)假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容要求： 1．描述漫画内容；　2.发表个人感想。 注意： 1．短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3．词数：120左右； 4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇：告示牌sign Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.______________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, ① with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. ② What’s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame! 　　Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings., ③ 本文是一篇记叙文，记叙自己的所见所感，故用第一人称，时态以一般过去时态为主，其他时态为辅。 第一段：简要描述公园的景色，重点描写湖中两个人的所作所为与湖边告示牌的内容。 第二段：发表个人感想。 亮点一：本篇文章要点全面、逻辑性强，句与句之间使用了正确的连接词；还运用了一些高级表达，行文流畅、逻辑性强是本文的一大亮点。 亮点二：①使用了高级句型with复合结构with the sun shining and birds singing；②使用了衔接句what‘s worse 以及现在分词短语totally ignoring the noticeable sign ...作伴随状语；③倒装句Only in this way can we live in more comfortable ...的使用也是本文的亮点，以上句式都给文章增添了不少光彩。 如何写故事类文章 故事类文章属于记叙文文体。这种文体相对来说常见易写。不过在写作过程中一些技巧需要灵活地掌握和运用： 1．要把握住记叙文的六个要素，即时间(when)，地点 (where)，人物(who)，事件(what)，原因(why)和过程(how)。把握好这六个要素，写故事性记叙文就成功了一半。 2．要把握故事性记叙文的结构。在文章开头要交代故事发 生的时间、地点和人物，然后写事件的原因及发展过程，最后写结果。同时在结尾处要尽量自然，点明文章主题。