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5）I attached our e-catalog for your reference, 首先这是一整句话，最后要用句号，不是逗号。还有，第一人称太多了，先是I，再是We，现在又是I开头的句子，句型太单调了，会让看的人觉得很无聊。如果换成Attached our e-catalogue for your reference!或者Enclosed our e-catalogue for your review!是不是会稍微好一点？ 6）Any demands please kindly contact with us. 一开始就谈“需求”是不是太直接了？如果换成有任何问题，请随时联系我们，会不会更加委婉一些？ Dear sirs, From the internet, we get your company name. What I want is just to see that if we have the chance to cooperate in the near future or not. We are a factory of fiberglass in China and our main product is chopped strand mat and stitch chopped strand mat and etc. We have been in th