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Guide Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instruction given below in Chinese. 假设你将作为高三毕业生代表,在毕业晚会上作一简短的告别演说。演讲内容包括： 对高中生活的怀念 对老师，对母校的感谢 对同学的祝福 Key Words speech, represent all the students, before graduation reluctance to part, gratitude, wishes As time goes by, we are now college students. I cant’s help feeling excited. The following are the contents of my speech. …. I used to be poor at my maths. My teacher never gave up teaching me. He helped me to improve my maths from day to night. I greatly appreciate my teacher’s helping me and … Outline Beginning (10%) Reluctance to part from others (35%) Gratitude to the school and teachers (35%) Wishes for the fellow students (20%) Handwriting: Avoid Errors: Our teachers and school has taught us a lot. Avoid Errors: As for our classmates, they might be our friends and enemies, we have worked together and fought for the same goal for three years. Avoid Errors: Time really flies. We will graduate quickly. It is a honour to represent for all the students to deliver the speech. Avoid Errors: For the past 3 years, we have been busy studying and were offered many opportunities. It is us who were looking forward to the new school life 3 years ago. Develop the sentences length Short sentences: quick, clean and forceful Too many short sentences: lose the power, lower the level 1.Use and, but, for, so, nor, or… Radio advertisements are broadcast daily or weekly. Radio advertisements reach a wide audience. 1.Use and, but, for, so, nor, or… The negotiators worked to gain approval for the contract. The negotiators worked at a steady pace. However, they worked slowly. 1.Use and, but, for, so, nor, or… The city council conducted a study of public transportation. The study was lengthy. The study was detailed. 2.Use “;” + however, furthermore, instead, consequently… The actresss performance electrified the audience; ________, lighting and sound